When I
decided to write a love story and discussed the thought of one with
my best friend at work, she almost jerked with coffee spilling ,all over. She was
too sure I would never be able to write one. I couldn't figure any reason
why she quirked that way but nevertheless my feeble attempt only bought about
this.
For
long she was expecting true love and well IT did happen to her too. Like
million other girls, she felt a complete stranger to her selves now. She felt
distant from everyone around her. There was a marked difference in her behaviour and it was evident that she was feeling pure happiness after a long time.
She never
knew how or when or why it had to happen but the inevitable had happened. There
was no escape from the very feeling that left her sleepless at nights and
dreaming during the days.
She found
herself lost even whilst travelling in an ever crowded metro. She felt happy at the
very mention of him and even a slight thought of him made her blush.
At times she
used to stand in front of the mirror and iterate the dialogue she would say to
him during their first meet. She was too sure she would utter "I love you”
in a low soft voice holding his hands and looking into his deep dreamy sleepy
eyes.
Her
dreams for him were too many that at times there would be a riot in her brain.
She would even contemplate HOW could she be so confident about him? What gave
her the immense faith and belief in him .Time would fly by as she tried to answer
her questions . At times all that mattered to her was his smile and at
times she would frown for his non -responsiveness. She ridiculed the fact that
he would be so unresponsive and snobbish on days when she would chirp her heart
out like a parrot.
Sometimes she
would look deep into her eyes and wonder if she was right in what she was doing
too.
Months flew
by and she looked at the mirror and saw that she had gained few pounds all over
her body symmetrically. There wasn't much change in her diet except that she
had now taken to less salty foods. Her added pounds actually made her happy
now. She was no longer the high school teen who would crib at every dollop of
added fat. Times had changed and the intermittent weather had got on her too.
The people
around her understood her little tantrums and sometimes got annoyed with the
adamant Taurean nature. It made people frown and smile alike as her
unconditional love for the would-be was evident.
"Would
it be love at first sight, what colour would suit us both, what would I do to
make his birthday better?"- So many thoughts and more. Every day passed by
and her long wait was to get over soon.
One evening
she stood by the window sill of the hospital and looked outside to see a little
boy plucking flowers for his sister and a funny smile grew over her. She looked
at the dainty clock on the wall and knew that, few more hours and her wait was
to get over.
The clock now
stuck 4 and it was early morning hours on the cool spring morning and she woke
up as if from a dream. There was pain all over her and she remembered the
struggle she had been through the early hours of dawn. It was almost a
nightmare, screams, shouts and pain. Yet she gained strength to ask her husband
her little bundle of joy.
There he was,
carefully tied up in pristine Pink towel with tiny fingers and legs jutting out
and a face that looked like a cherub, her little boy. Overcome with emotions
she bent and kissed the little guy and uttered "I love you”. To her
utterance all he did was to yawn deeply, smiled a little and fell asleep again.
She knew it was his way of saying “Me too :)“.
I'm done with
my love story and true to my friend’s expectations I don’t know IF I could ever
write one ;)
This jumped in several places and I was left wondering . . . Reread to get the story.
ReplyDeleteJoy always,
Susan
Ah! that's why the hiatus in publishing this post :) :) I wanted to write it but I guess its in bits and pieces :P Perhaps when I'm in my family way my thought process would better up ;) :P :P
DeleteHeyy really nice description .. when you mentioned love i was expecting a different one but didnt expect it would be between a mother and a new born ... cool :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Hariharan :)Ya I intentionally drew the story line to make it appear like a girl-boy love :)
DeleteThis is nice. I dont know whether this would be the feeling of all the expecting mothers. But if it was like this, then beautifullllll
ReplyDeleteTrue Annasarp :) I'm not sure either if the feelings are so but this is pure imagination :)
ReplyDeletegreat one... :) very well written... only towards the end i was able to guess...!! :) keep up the good work..
ReplyDeleteThank you Sooo much Bala :) :) Love your comments :)
ReplyDeletevery nice da....beautiful feeling of a mother but never expected such an ending...tooo good:):):)
ReplyDeleteThank you sooooo much Rekha :) :) :) Lovely comments :) :) thank you da
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