Sitting in a melancholic mood Niya seemed too sure of what she
was about to say and had rehearsed her words more than once.
She sat at the coffee bar waiting patiently and sighed a sign of
relief when she saw Raghu.
"Raghu" - a name she was never to forget nor forgive.
Not realizing what was in store for him, Raghu smiled innocently
but Niya simply frowned.
Niya cleared her throat and said “I wish to end this. This is no
longer going to work between us. You’re completely not what I want. If I’ve ever
hurt you, Sorry. Pl don’t trouble sending any text or calling me .It’s over.
Bye. Am leaving."
Raghu was visibly shocked and left the coffee bar only
after an hour .He wondered IF he was dreaming.
Niya walked out and swiftly reached her home, fell on the bed
and cried her heart out.
Niya recollected every memory of Raghu before falling asleep.
The
Meet
Raghu was a civil engineer and Niya, an architect. Niya's first
project was the restoration work of a church. Raghu was the junior
engineer and the one appointed to look over the architect's designs .He
dismissed the designs stating "A childish affair, look at the structures
and too many lines. This kid needs to learn at least one more year at
architecture school I guess"
Niya was upset that her debut design was a failure.
Amidst all tears she wanted to meet the over-paid, over-proud
engineer once before accepting for a design change.
Raghu was not aware the architect was indeed a woman and it was
Niya.
Niya brushed aside Raghu's flirting eyes and asked sternly
"May I have the reasons for the dismissal of my design".
Raghu took few seconds before he realized he was indeed facing
the architect he had brushed off as "childish".
Raghu said "I think you’re ...ummm...well..."
"Niya... I had sent you my designs for the restoration of
the church...which I believe you have dismissed..."
Raghu continued beamingly "This is our first meet and I'm
glad to have met you Niyaaa(he smiled trying to pronounce her name
perfectly)"
Niya glared at him and Raghu continued "The design you have
given represents the monolithic age of churches while we are restoring a
Catholic church which only uses gothic structures!"
Niya interrupted "Ah so you have not read the
complete history of the church engineer! Pl do me a favor of reading the
complete history of the Church .I would meet you tomorrow”
It was love at first sight for Raghu. He updated his status in
social networking site as "Cupid shoots his arrows at unprecedented time,
place and upon people who are absolutely clueless of his naughtiness." To
him the very name of Niya seemed attractive and used to call out to her with so
much love.
Niya whisked and Raghu spent the rest of the day scanning,
reading googgling the entire history of the church.
Raghu was indeed shocked that Niya had built the entire sketch
in lieu of the church that existed as early as 52 A.D. Niya had done a thorough
job.
Next day Raghu drove across the city, reached the office where
Niya worked and spoke to her apologetically and said the design was moved for
further processing to the other engineers.
Niya did not greet nor cherish the engineer's coming but simply
said "Thanks!"
Three weeks later Raghu found that the lady whom he fell for
instantly walked right up to him at his office and greeted him cheerfully
"Hi Raghu, I have got the approval from your team and I'm in . I'm looking
forward to working with you"
Opposites
Attract
Raghu and Niya spent hours discussing every detail of the church
.Over coffee-breaks, lunch, meetings their friendship grew.
Niya was a good planner, strict and disciplined. Raghu was like
any other guy at 23 -carefree, reckless and happy. His boyish charm and
tantrums always attracted Niya and kept her interested in him.
They would spend many evenings arguing over supremacy of
architects over engineers and Niya always won.
One day Raghu remarked “I could never draw much, guess that's
why I chose engineering. Had I known you before I would have fairly chosen
architecture .You make even the hardest things in life light for me!”
Niya simply chirped "Ha ha ha ... You’re drooling!!
“And she winked at Raghu.
Raghu proposed to Niya on July 2010 and she took a week to
decide if Raghu was the guy for her life. She could sense that they were soul
mates but was weary that Raghu was indeed a striking opposite to her.
The saying "opposites attract" seemed to keep running
in her mind all the time.
Niya knew Raghu was a man of her dreams but slightly clichéd!
Six months passed and the project was going steadfast and so was
their relationship.
Raghu tried to change a lot for Niya and she would always
acknowledge his efforts.
She was very comfortable with Raghu's caring but domineering
nature and respected his tastes.
Niya knew Raghu's otherwise friendly nature always brought other
friends which included women too. She would grow jealous of his friends and at
times they would fight incessantly.
They would quarrel endlessly for hours and patch up within
minutes.
Raghu was very fond of Niya and knew that she was the best for
him. He would go every length to make sure Niya was happy - in short his love
for her was unconditional.
Gifts, hang-outs, gossips, seamless roaming, and aimless talks -
the love between the duo grew like the cherry blossoms after winter.
The
Change
Two years rolled by. All was fine until Niya realized she could
no longer take the carelessness of Raghu. Raghu would forget, lose and
haplessly regret.
Niya was shocked when Raghu coolly said he had lost the pendant
she had given him.
When questioned by Niya he said "Niya...you have me dear...
Is the pendant more important? I lost it while roaming the other day at
night"
Niya frowned and sulkily replied "the pendant was more
important".
That was the first time Raghu realized Niya was a serious person
and to fall prey of her tongue was the most stinging experience.
Raghu had forgetfully shredded papers that Niya had specifically
asked to be kept safe and when Niya found this she was over raged.
Niya was patient in the beginning but soon realized she could no
longer take Raghu’s boyish charms and would scream at him incessantly.
Raghu would often dream about the happy days he had spent with
Niya and wished hard she would be more forgiving.
"Change thy name is woman would suit Niya the best",
Raghu would often cry to his close friends.
Niya controlled her anger after continuous plea from Raghu
and swore never to hurt him if he promised to be more careful in times to come.
All hell broke loose when Raghu for the nth time lost the gift
Niya had got him.
Niya was never the same woman Raghu knew before. Her phone calls
were stern, her messages lacked cheerfulness.
The bitterness between them only carved a boulevard between
their loving hearts.
Niya could no longer forgive Raghu and he was losing his
interest in being the ideal man for his woman.
One fine night Niya decided to call it quits and called Raghu to
the coffee shop the next day.
All this and some painful memories, Niya fell asleep with eyes
puffed with tears.
Niya wished she could have Raghu back but she no longer had the
strength to hurt her selves more.
Sammy’s
Wedding
Three months had passed and Niya was still recovering from her
break up. Raghu tried to call and patch at least thirty times but Niya wouldn't relent.
Niya's best friend Sammy was getting married the next week
and Niya decided to stay at Sammy's place that was in Egmore.
On the evening before the wedding there was a grand party
arranged for Sammy's best friends.
Niya was more than relieved to see her best friends from school
and there was lots of cheers and laughter all around her. She felt happy.
Suddenly Rishi, Niya's best friend pulled her aside from others
and exclaimed “Your my best friend Niya and its high time I told you my plans
with Rithika, our juniour at college.. We plan to tie the knot soon"
Niya patted Rithika friendly and said "Lovely to know that
Rishi..Am happy for you guys. Do tie the knot soon ;) “.
Rishi continued "I'm yet to tell others. Will do so soon so
keep the cat in the bag for a while Niyaaa!"
Niya assured "Sure Rishi... Will do so and all the best for
you guys."
Niya chirped "In the end you too got hooked - Rishi! Happy
for you man"
Rishi sensed that Niya was visibly disturbed and though
concerned he did not bother to probe more as he knew Niya wouldn’t like
unnecessary interference in her life.
After almost all the guests had left the gals planned to chat
all night when Niya suddenly felt she wanted some time alone.
Niya left in a haste informing Sammy that she would be nearby
garden.
The
Love-Garden
Niya loved Egmore for more than one reason. To her the area
around Christ College was the best as it had well planned roads and houses.
She had taken Raghu many a times and showed him and explained
him every single construction and design.
To Raghu all the buildings looked simple but to see his
lady-love blush and speak volumes was worth the painstaking, boring drive to
the place.
Niya was a child at heart and Raghu loved to listen to her
talks.
Niya knew the area well and walked on the lonely road still clad
in the heavy zardozi sari in middle of the night.
She did not feel scared because she knew she would be safe
because and nothing could be colder than the coldness in her heart.
She sat on a bench in the garden for a long time sobbing and
thinking of Raghu.
She wished for him beside her! She wished she was more
forgiving and....
The
Love Birds
Niya sobbed with her hands covering her face. She had turned
pink and her face looked paler. Niya suddenly heard footsteps and got up
to leave.
At a distance she could see a silhouette of a six foot
man. Niya was visibly shocked when she heard the man call out
"Niya".
Niya knew it was Raghu and she got up and turned away in anger.
"Raghu, I'm leaving. I don’t know your business here but I
need to go"
"Niya hold on a minute. I need you. Why don’t you see me
eye to eye and speak! I aint your enemy"
Niya turned and to look at his lady in moonlight was so exciting
for him but seeing her pink cheeks and nose meant that she had cried and Raghu
wished he could comfort her.
Niya continued "What brings you here at this hour! Are you
mad! Don’t you feel scared! Go home now; it’s bitterly cold out here."
Raghu calmed her saying "Don’t you feel cold and I'm here
because this place though boring used to be my gals dream... She always wanted
a house here...You look at that building Its made of rock solid stones brought
from Peru... And the road that your standing is made from not the usual
stones... And...The red sand is actually oxide form of.. "
Niya was overwhelmed and she pulled Raghu close to her and bit
his cheeks hard.
Raghu hugged Niya and whispered in her ears proudly “See I do
remember and I love you"
Niya recovered from her happiness and amidst tears screamed
"I love you too... but... The building there doesn’t have stones from
Peru, the one behind you does.. It’s tough for you to remember, isn’t it....?
I'm happy you at least remember that it’s my dream to have a house here
...!"
Niya nudged Raghu to walk with her and they walked round the
place till dawn. Though Raghu never favored walking as he was a lazy guy he did
it for his love of the woman beside him.
Joking, teasing and after a loads of push-play the couple left
the place happily.
Nice ...good one de :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much :) Tupil :)
DeleteAwwwww... it was very nice :) I liked the chemistry between them.. sounds more similar to one of the person i know :) and i loved the scene when the guy came n apologised in the odd time for his lady love:) so sweet :) but yeah we need to accept the reality that all guys are so careless and lazy .. Only if gals push them they tend to listen :) anywes good job mythri :) loved it .. Thanks for making it a positive end :)
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Thank you soo much for your comments de :) :) Lovely to have your comments.:) Thanks a ton vidya :) :) :)
Deletehey hii.. that was really cool.. :) I loved the pulling-closer-and-biting-his-cheeks part.. :D keep it coming.. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Bala :) :) :) :) Will keep blogging more ;)
DeleteSuper good:) Loved it!
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DeleteBeautiful flow :) Loved it from top to toe :D keep writing :)
ReplyDeleteThank you sooo much Priya :) :) :) sure will keep blogging :):)
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